By the way, I transferred your story to word, just copy and paste, with putting in one space between paragraphs. I came up with 78 pages with 10 point font! Thats a long story! I don't think I have ever known of anyone, on any forum that did as much writing as you did, I can see why it took several months for you to write it.
Good job!
Please, post a picture or two of "The Duke"
