A little ad etiquette. Pointers to writting a better ad

J, 4 years ago I had a 72 Plymouth Belvedere station wagon very similar to yours and just as clean only in brown, bought it rust free from the original owner who had it garaged every night and always kept it clean, he lived across the street from me but your color is much nicer. I wound up selling it to a friend who built it into a bracket racer and the launch was outstanding.