A little ad etiquette. Pointers to writting a better ad

Personally I prefer the '71 Swinger 360 4spd ad.

Although I would like to see the pictures on the same page as the ad (reload them if you need to). Enough pictures exterior, interior, under the hood, etc... to get a feel for the car but not too many that the page is slow to load.

I don't want to read through all the BS..." gets comments, thumbs up, etc… everywhere it goes"..."cool look"..."aggressive stance"..."awesome ride"..."81 year old original owner (who never changed the oil and drove by braile)"...all mean nothing to me.

Tell me what has been done to the car and what needs to be done. Don't be vague with "Best Offer", don't threaten to "part the car out".

I don't want to waste my time or the sellers time.

An ad is to get someone to call and come out...the BS and handfuls of paperwork to back up restoration, rebuild and grandma ownership are to close the deal.

If I am just killing time at work looking at cars...then tell me a story and paint a pretty picture...while I drink my caffeine.

Paul
(just my 2 cents)