My first magazine article write up

Nice work, Dave. I do have a few comments to help clean things up.

"Home" page
Maybe separate street address, city, and state with commas, or you could
stack address above city, state.
Consider making e-mail address into hyperlink, wherever it appears throughout site.

"About Westech" page
We currently offer engines packages for: (not plural)
* Chrysler/Dodge 392/426 Hemi V8 (spelling)

"Machine Shop" page
Consider replacing pictures with bulleted titles that lead to other pages with similar themes.

"Project Cars" page
This page is set up... (not necessary to capitalize)
Norm's Tech Talk (use apostrophe to indicate possessive)
...writes articles for... (spelling)
If interested, don't hesitate... (needs comma)
...and we hope to hear... (or maybe) ...we hope to hear...

"Cars of Westech" page
'68 Hemi (apostrophe goes in front of year to replace missing "19")
Same with '88
Jack's V-16 (use apostrophe to indicate possessive)
Same with Westech's
Blown (misspelled in a couple of captions)

"Open House" page
Try to reduce pictures on page to a few with captions that lead to other pages with similar themes.
All on this one page seems too cluttered.

"Directions" page
Get direct directions... (Is this what you meant to say?)

I wish I knew how to develop web sites.
Jerry

Thanks Jerry,
Wow. Guess you must be an English teacher. I'm sure the editor of Moparmax would be happy to see this. LOL. :read2:

I only did the header piece in my own words. None of the adverts, layout or anything else. I just submitted my written article with pictures. It was verbatim. I could pass this along though.